give back

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give back

  took your advice and i stayed away
realized i am a prisoner of pain
my hearts falling to my feet reported as a stray
and staying here with you theres nothing to gain
grit my teeth to keep in my words
tryin not to blinkto keep my tears captive
releasing my thoughts soar away like a bird
knowing you my mind paused now back active
i let my inner faces keep me from love
lost my interest in my biggest secret
so i believe that now i will rise above
every tear, all pain, and hurt i return to u keet it!
               I give back

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knight4696 commented on give back

09-06-2009

Way to go Alice! This is a very strong and emotional poem I loved the ending. Great Job!

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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