Pick up lines

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    Pick up lines


    Every cloud has a silver lining, yes, this is the thought I hold on to,
    Trodding carefully around the puddles created by other people’s rainclouds,
    I look up tentatively at my own, and think the last thing I want right now is a silver lightning bolt to come streaking through and put an end to what has already been a miserable day, but this they tell me, is the best I have to look forward to..
    Off course, every dog does have his day, I say this to my own pet rusty every time I go outside to walk him and exchange pleasantries with fellow owners, I cherish it as well when I’m feeling down,
    Because in my state of depression what I need is to be lowered to the base position of an animal, and then offered some vague promise, yes rusty, we all have our days, you luckiest of all for having less to look forward to,
    But do not despair, Rome was after all not built in a day, Forgive me my haste, It wasn’t,
    It took about nine hundred years, give or take a few, so only three hundred twenty-eight thousand five hundred days left, and no, I’m not counting leap years, thank you t for asking though, we should do this more often, but before you go, Please write the leprechaun to tell him I’m not falling for his pot of gold fiasco again, also I can’t seem to see the grass behind all these fences frost has been building, and tell that kid round the corner I want my lemonade stand back.

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    hdmac commented on Pick up lines

    07-18-2009

    Too many cliches. It makes your poem boring. Try to be more original with your work. I would like to see something else from you.

    pagaa commented on Pick up lines

    04-15-2009

    you write as cute as you look.the boy youre carring,is he yours?good job all thesame.

    Bwyn commented on Pick up lines

    04-12-2009

    I like the factthat these seem like just raw emotions and thoughts!

    ladyd37 commented on Pick up lines

    04-11-2009

    gr8 work !! keep it comin!!

    pumbaa commented on Pick up lines

    04-11-2009

    good work

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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