Paranoid Again

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    Paranoid Again

    So, before we fell in love i trusted you,
    when we fell in love i trusted you,
    when you talked to me i trusted you,
    but then you bought that wretched thing they call technology-
    A cell phone.
    So, before we fell in love, i lusted you,
    when we made love i trusted you...
    but when you bought your phone i busted you, so
    now you wonder why I'm paranoid again?
    The silent nights are disturbed by the beeps,
    you charge that thing daily as we sleep
    and yet when it rings, you either smile or laugh,
    that technology has replaced me...us
    do u still wonder why I'm paranoid again?

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    Qualin commented on Paranoid Again

    05-15-2011

    trusted,lusted,busted...the usual pattern search the eyes deep in conversation with someone who really Loves if be the truth is always in their eyes ...soul searching...a good write Thanks QUALIN
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    Phoenix9 commented on Paranoid Again

    11-19-2009

    very good write, and right to the point, very talented with a good view of the world around you
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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