Our Souls!

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    Our Souls!

     

    Our Souls!

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    Your eyes, the glass and the drink

    The cup and the wine

    Your lips, the song and the tone

    The float and the groan

    You the sweet sparrow

    Your nest in my blood

    Your smile in my heart

    My poor heart,

    So sad for missing you

    So happy you ar leaving, for your good sake

    Even though, we never been so close

    And we never ever, rubbed nose to nose

    Still there is some thing to say

    Our souls never been far away.

     

    Nasr Badwan

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    carynontherhine commented on Our Souls!

    11-09-2010

    A love that has left is pain to the heart. I not only felt emotional pain but I actually could feel physical pain as well. Your ending are so enjoyable for me. Our souls never been far away. How awesome is that!! Ten plus from me! Hugz
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    Kaleidoscope commented on Our Souls!

    11-10-2009

    WOW LIKE I SAID ! AGAIN ONE OF A KIND..YOU HAVE THIS UNIQUE TALENT WITH YOUR WRITING...AND BELIEVE ME I HAVE READ MANY HUNDREDS OR THOUSANDS OF POEMS IN MY LIFE..NEVER ANY LIKE YOUR WRITING..KEEP SHARING YOUR TALENTED GIFT.. THANX AGAIN K
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    badwan

    11/10/2009

    Dear Kale your words is too big fore my simple potry, I have to thank V,mutch.

    kmooney commented on Our Souls!

    11-10-2009

    Very nice write Mr. Badwan. Very heartfelt. Like the flow and the message. Thanks for sharing... Kevin
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    badwan

    11/10/2009

    Dear kevin nice to read your valuable comments regads

    Madelynn commented on Our Souls!

    09-30-2009

    Oh,this is devine! Every line just held so much poetic feeling! I love this.It showcases your ability so well-and captures the heart of the reader-a piece to be read over and over! Great job!
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    badwan

    09/30/2009

    Madelynn realy iliked yuor poetry,today i can see how deep yur commets are, thank you

    badwan

    10/13/2009

    Thank Madelyne for going tgrough my poem, your wards giving me power to try again and again.

    randawolf commented on Our Souls!

    09-14-2009

    I like your poem.. deep and intimate.. I like the comparisons
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    badwan

    09/14/2009

    Thank you for comment true love means doob feelig. And easy to forget. Regards

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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