Only You To Hold (Rough Draft)

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This is a rough draft. Will revise it later. It's for my baby , so I want it to be perfect, just like her.

Only You To Hold (Rough Draft)

Hold you forever
And never let go.
We will ride together
Into the unknown.
Hold you, my love.
Hold you, my dear
With you, my dove
I'll never shed a tear.
So don't leave me
Cuz you set me free.
Hold me, it feels right
Carry me across the threshold
Into that good night...

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Twinopolis commented on Only You To Hold (Rough Draft)

07-09-2009

Awwwz! Its perfect! I can't express how much this means to me love.

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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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