one fine day

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    one fine day

    I am a man without a woman
    a lion without a lioness
    a king without a queen
    a music without a writer
    a day without a date
    like adam's first day on earth
    one fine day
    one sweet day
    you would look towards my way
    u would smile at me
    reach your hands to me
    your heart to be opened for me
    one fine day
    the day i had been patiently waiting for
    intoxicated by your absence
    high and going wacky
    one sweet day
    u would know that i love you...


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    sincere commented on one fine day

    05-14-2009

    Very nice, simple and sweet!

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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