unpretty woman

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    unpretty woman

    lipsticks are so fancy,neither are lip styles lovely,
    your inside is my pride and your palin truth my desire,
    if only you could be you and stop fantasizing,u colud be mine.
    in a twinkle of an eye u twist your waist and make a hair do that makes u fell superior.
    if only u could see how inferior a woman is without pride and integrity,
    how ordinary u are without a real life,then you would know what i hate in you
    ur bangles and chains are not different from rags in my eyes
    neither is your bleaching skin anywhere away from a chameleons,check inside of you and see how unpretty you are without a lovely character.


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    Sorealpoet commented on unpretty woman

    09-08-2009

    Very well spoken man, loved it. Keep the good work up.

    Fullofthoughts commented on unpretty woman

    05-15-2009

    I loved it.

    montiyah commented on unpretty woman

    05-14-2009

    I really like this poem because its a true fact that material things may make you look better, but its camoflauge to whats really going on. . .I feelin this poem keep up the good work!

    sincere commented on unpretty woman

    05-14-2009

    Lovely and so true!

    LouKyBabe commented on unpretty woman

    03-27-2009

    wow what a very true statement...good job for putting it into a poem.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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