ohh yes thats me!

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    ohh yes thats me!

    I turn the corner and I felt your gaze tracing my body….astonished with such an appeal …that’s never been seen before…. How could you not admire something so exquisite….Soft light brown caramel skin? An aura so unbelievably breath taking… Feisty in my walk…Diva written when I talk… A…OH yes that’s me! Head held high when I walk into a room…and just like that…that sacred box you call a heart was taken…. Well so you thought…I’ve witnessed your type before…were the scene of sunshine and rain would occur…so like every other that approached me with an “excuse me miss” or an “hey baby what’s your name” was left there curiosity  and shame...


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    Iliketoflyaway commented on ohh yes thats me!

    09-14-2009

    cute!! poem I had to give the poem at least a 8 rating

    DennisScott commented on ohh yes thats me!

    08-15-2009

    Your A.... That is cool to each their own. I like the confidence in this piece.

    CaramelHoneyDip

    08/17/2009

    A...? lol

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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