"Observation of One's Naked Self"

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    "Observation of One's Naked Self"

    woman
    of many faces
    fighting time that stands still
    shadow dancing to sounds of silence
    she searches for the fountain of divine wisdom and truth
    with angels flight she comes to those around her like a messenger
    leaving behind an awakening light of glory that dwells in our souls forever
    giving world wide evidence of her significance, feeds her exalted character
    accomplished movement is represented to please people
    still she sits in the darkness of the alone
    frozen to her countless hardships
     only to parish from thirst
    until the savage of love
    journeys into her heart
    unarmed

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    Rofoluezz commented on "Observation of One's Naked Self"

    06-15-2010

    Sister Sister, i feel your pain i see your glory as you rise again i should not regret the things i´ve done i am more than just your Mothers Son.
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    Merlyn commented on "Observation of One's Naked Self"

    04-19-2010

    I so much see what you are saying. I am right where you are, Hold fast. we are right where we must be.
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    icu2 commented on "Observation of One's Naked Self"

    04-12-2010

    This pretty much sums it all up, in a nut shell. Love makes the world go around so they say. Nice job!!
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    gogant commented on "Observation of One's Naked Self"

    03-25-2010

    Well Tracy, one never knows their true inner self without the help of that special love that one keeps their heart opened for. This poem of yours is very enlightening........................................gogant
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    Teardrops commented on "Observation of One's Naked Self"

    03-25-2010

    Tell the story sister , We as woman need to step up and take our destiny in our own hands . This is a awsome poem thanks for letting me read this Marie
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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