A Journey

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  • Freebird
  • No poetic puns or fancy frazes, just 3 words that drive me crazy- "I Love You"

A Journey

All at will
Troubled heart be still
Free my thoughts that keep me ill
Close your eyes and shut your mind
Inside your soul, peace you'll find
Listen to the whispering winds
Telling you all the answers lie within
We're not naked from the truth
Only blanketed from misconceptions told at youth
All lost souls chained to self-abuse
No longer can afford such excuse
Rest well those meek and dreary
For the road you seek is long and weary
It's path will free you
And each step make you strong
Only at it's end will you hear the angels song

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icu2 commented on A Journey

04-12-2010

This was a sweet write. You truly are gifted......................Thanks.

gogant commented on A Journey

03-19-2010

A true masterpiece.........one cannot live without being loved...or at least, liked a little bit by someone. Freebird, you are an artist............................gogant

Freebird

03/20/2010

WOW, It just means so much to share my words with others. I'm glad you like it and that you took the time to tell me.

Teardrops commented on A Journey

03-19-2010

a great poem and truer words were never spoken thanks Marie

Freebird

03/20/2010

Thank you Teardrops,

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

Freebird’s Poems (6)

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"Observation of One's Naked Self" 5
A Journey 3
"Breaking Free" 2
"Divorce" 1
"Twisted" 1
"Broken Promises" 2