"Broken Promises"

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  • Emotional
    • Freebird
    • No poetic puns or fancy frazes, just 3 words that drive me crazy- "I Love You"

    "Broken Promises"

    The silhouette on the wall
    Shadow of two so small
    Silent stares given in nights light
    Send my angels to their flight
    To each, give strength of an angels fight
    Doorway of their hearts are open
    Inside you'll see how badly broken
    The pain of my addiction worn on their face
    Those eyes only yearning to share in my space
    Bring no illusion to what the cost
    The time between us is what we've lost
    My love for both has never gone unspoken
    Proven now by no more promises broken

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    icu2 commented on "Broken Promises"

    03-20-2010

    Eloquently said...written by a true poet, as well. I LOVE the feel of this...just love it.

    SavVySam commented on "Broken Promises"

    03-06-2010

    A nicely written work of quiet sadness. Well done.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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