Now
I weep silentlyThose cold wet tears
Ruuning down my face
I laugh gently
My sad, sad laugh
Filling up the empty space
I cry louder now
Drowning in my sorrow
Begging you to let me go
Because I can't wait for tomorrow
Now
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- tstlove4never
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Poem Commentary
I felt like i was trapped when i wrote this. Lost at hope of getting out of the situation i was in.Those cold wet tears
Ruuning down my face
I laugh gently
My sad, sad laugh
Filling up the empty space
I cry louder now
Drowning in my sorrow
Begging you to let me go
Because I can't wait for tomorrow
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01-30-2010
- awww thats sad, the sadness can be felt through your use of words...good poem
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