Mystery Man

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    Mystery Man

    Silent night.

    Deep in thought.

    Trying to understand the uncomprehensible.

    Patience running thin, I'm trying to break in.

    Into the mind of a Man of Few Words.

    Time is all it takes to unlock the mystery.

    The mystery of his mind; the thoughts in his head.

    But you can only try to understand whats been said.

    Not much by a Man of Few Words...
    Mayber the fewer the words, the easier to understand.

    The more said, the more confusion.

    But its worth it to understand.

    To unlock the mind of the opposite man.

    But i have no control over his speech...
    So until i find the key, I guess this Man of Few Words will remain a mystery to me.

    A good one in deed.


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    Kdaddy commented on Mystery Man

    08-27-2009

    I really like this poem. I understand the frustration of communication in relationships.

    bandgeek

    09/07/2009

    Thank You! I know it can be tough, but if the other person doesnt want to let you in to their life, its not worth it!

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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