My world

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My world

no matter what i ask,
the answer's always later,
five minutes later,
it's forgotten,
like they don't care,
no one does,
so far,
there are only 3 guys,
3 guys that can take things away,
make the nightmares fade,
the thoughts slip away,
anger turn to sadness,
I see them,
all bad things slip away,
no sadness, no anger, no depression,
but when they leave,
it's all right back,
the day they let me down,
is the day it rushes back,
the anger, sadness, and depression,
and everytime they come,
they leave just as fast as they came,
once again,
i'm alone,
in,
my world of sadness, anger, and depression.

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Smoogej1s commented on My world

12-14-2010

Awesome thoughts and words put together. Hope to hear more from you soon

Musicmynded1 commented on My world

12-10-2010

Good brew of words building emotion of proportions... keep writing.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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