My World

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    My World

    Walking on shadowed path,
    listening to songs of birds.

    Bare feet covered in dust,
    feeling the earth beneath me.

    Breezes singing threw the trees,
    caress my naked arms.

    The smell of the forest frees me,
    My spirit feels transformed.

    Deeper still I walk,
    looking for my true form.




    by Crystalin Patrick 6/27/2009

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    redbloodink commented on My World

    06-18-2010

    WoW.... True form...... I really liked that... I found mine ..... I'm a female impersonator.... May you find yourself even tho I think you have a a writer...., and so much more.... red
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    BringMeBullets commented on My World

    02-08-2010

    Your true form, that is what we are all looking for. I think you found yours within the creation of this fabulous poem. Great work.
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    Artie commented on My World

    07-07-2009

    Nice poem.... And a great way to got in touch with your true form.
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    StandingBear commented on My World

    07-07-2009

    A nicely written work involving the intimacy of Mother Earth and barefeet. For to leave footprints is a pleasant way. Great write.
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    dragonfly1023 commented on My World

    06-27-2009

    love to see a another connection made with the Great Mother. if more of us spent time communing with nature instead of destroying it the world would be a better place.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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