Vampire

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    this is just somthing that came to me after reading a book

    Vampire

    Your skin is perfect and hard
    Smooth and icy like marble.

    Your eyes like melted silver
    swirled with a wild heat.

    Your breath, though sweet, was cool
    with a hint of death in your smile.

    I will leave behind my human life,
    and live forever by your side.

    I am prepared for the pain,
    and the power of the thirst.

    I give my neck to your kiss
    and wait for the end,
    or the beginning


     








    By Crystalin Patrick 6/27/2009

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    Crush commented on Vampire

    05-17-2010

    hah ! well done...that how it would be isn't it so ? thanks for sharing.

    BringMeBullets commented on Vampire

    02-05-2010

    How cool! Reminds me of Bella and Edward. :) Very good description. Great job.

    greyeyes231

    02/06/2010

    I was inspired by Bella and Edward when I made this poem. Thank you for the comment

    POETSLUV commented on Vampire

    07-15-2009

    that was so great I LOVE IT that was so emototional yet dark and full of love of giving ur self up

    BCP commented on Vampire

    06-27-2009

    oh! Grey Eyes, this is different. i like your style simply, plain and to the point. excellent. sincerely

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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