My Secret Love

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    My Secret Love

     I have a secret love
    but no one knows
    Except me
    i will never tell
    for he is mine and no one elses
    you can't have him
    but does he like me
    i need to know
    Could he like me?
    Maybe but i need to know
    i need him to like me
    because, i like him back
    i know he does
    I must find out
    i have to know before its to late
    But mabey he doesn't like me
    but, i think he does
    so i walk toward his locker my mind racing
    i must find out before he slips through my fingers
    i dont want him to leave
    But what if he doesn't like me back?

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    angelchaser commented on My Secret Love

    04-27-2010

    Only one way to find out...GO FOR IT!! Just always be yourself, never change to try to impress someone. if people can't accept you for who you are...they're not worth your time. A nicely written poem once again.
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    Cindy80 commented on My Secret Love

    04-22-2010

    I so like the way you wrote and ain't love something to hold you back from hate
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