My Love

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This was a new experience for me. The inspiration for this poem came from the hurt, anger, frustrations and broken heart of one of my very dear friends who is undergoing some terrible times. So I dedicate this poem to my friend Kimberly.

My Love

If I cut out my heart and gave it to you,

You would just throw it away.

When you look at me and see me cry,

You turn and walk away.

When you know something is wrong,

You just don’t care,

I guess the reality is you would be happier if I wasn’t even here.

I’m sorry.

I don’t understand what it is that I done so wrong

To make you feel our life together can no longer go on.

If this isn’t the way you feel, it’s how I feel in my heart.

Even with all this knowledge, I sill do not want to part.

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I have not lost hope in the love we once shared

I believe that all the happiness is still right here.

I can’t just give up and walk away

I remember you, the man, I fell in love with that special day.

I haven’t lost faith in our marriage, our love or in you

I only hope and pray that one day you will feel the same way too.

I pray with everything I have for God to see us thru

I have to face the reality, that decision will be made by you.

I ask that you be honest about what you really want

If you are not happy then maybe it’s best if we just part.

I can’t fight for something that will never be

I will never win the battle if you’re honestly not in love with me.

Is this really how you feel, that you’re not in love with me

I’m sorry once again this just makes no sense to me.

If you’re not in love with someone, then why would you stay

Instead of just being honest and going separate ways?

Sometimes I wish that you could feel the pain I feel inside

But I would never want you to hurt that deep inside.

I’ve been faithful, loyal and true

As bad as you hurt me, I would never hurt you.

Sill, I don’t know what it is that I done so wrong

Some days I think I never will but I’m holding strong

All the answers you have given me are vague and just not true

Nothing more than a mans poor, poor excuse!

You may no longer be in love with me

But care enough for the love we shared to just be honest with me.

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stever commented on My Love

05-26-2010

this is sad but so true in so many love lifes,i hope it all works out for you..StEvEr [read me if you like]

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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