My Lord of the Shadows ~ pt. 2

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My Lord of the Shadows ~ pt. 2

As I awake from a dream of darkness and fear
I start to laugh at myself realizing it was all a dream
open my eyes to a dimly lit room, candles all around
my body feeling weak and covered in soft satin sheets

Wondering where I am I move slowly to sit up
looking around me I see dark wood furniture
candles burning and old Victorian style antiques
thinking back to the alley I realize what has happened

My mind starts to panic, what to do next
before I can decide I feel a presence watching me
“I know you are there.”  I say with a shaky voice
“Please tell me what you want and why you have brought me here.”

“Do you not know, do you not feel it inside?”  He whispers
Still afraid and uncertain I shake my head no
“My love, my Countess, it is I that you feel inside you.
The voice that calls out to you, the yearning in your heart.”

to be continued

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mustascheman commented on My Lord of the Shadows ~ pt. 2

02-13-2010

DUDE!!... That's awesome! I love this kind of write. just please stop with to be continued stuff..gimme it all at once. I'm not very good with suspense movies either. Which is why I prefer comedy or horror flicks. Well done!

vampira1665

02/13/2010

Then you may not be very happy. I have one more piece and then the whole thing just stopped.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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