my interpretation

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my interpretation

My words interpreted through your thoughts
that being the sweetest poetry ever spoken
further enabling me to hear descriptions of water
clear as cloudless nights
stars dancing across the sky
leaving streams of city lights
scared to look away and
slowly my body seizes showered by your waves of
ECSTASY
breathing becomes my ultimate sacrifice
as I hear you say r...e...l...a...x...
your voice slow and smooth...
saxophones whine
through my hair
intertwined between strings of the bass...
low...
SEXY K...
symphonies and grand gestures taking me to your garden
where you live among my carnations
trimmed with pink lace.

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ahardwalk commented on my interpretation

11-27-2010

How you describe the life around you and the love you have is so astonishing to me!! Love them and keep them coming!!

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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