brown eyes
brown eyestell me why you cry
sing me a song today
your voice the violin...
brown eyes
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tell me why you cry
sing me a song today
your voice the violin...
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HandsofCrimson commented on brown eyes
05-28-2009
- This is so quaint, yet beautiful... I really love your choice of words MAL.... It is funny your voice the violin... i believe that the only instrument in the world that can truly sound like crying is the violin. Anyway Brown Eyes? what color are yours? lost love's eyes? makes one think. Beautiful
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dahlusion commented on brown eyes
05-26-2009
- This is so beautiful, I can not begin to explain it in words, simply and poetically pure, creative, masterful.
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