My Barely Bearable Desires Part 2

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I hope no one's too nauseated.

My Barely Bearable Desires Part 2

My heart yearns for her presence.

I can’t sleep anymore, it feels like my feelings for her are my very essence.

I’m scared of being rejected, I’d persevere but the feelings- the desire would keep burning in my soul;

Like a torch of my unreturned passion for her. She stole-

The key and when she finds out she’ll most likely throw it back in my face.

She’ll probably think I’m nothing but a disgrace.

Maybe I don’t belong even in the corner of her life.

I’m so filled with all these emotions, it’s causing me so much strife.

I should just let her be,

Before she discovers me.

But I won’t, because I want her.

This act alone will eventually be my undoing.

                                                                               -Blackrose95

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MarionYost commented on My Barely Bearable Desires Part 2

01-26-2010

Wow..... Just, WOW. Where do you get off being all modest? Hahaha... Seriously, great write. I can definitely appreciate your work. You should read my "Untitled" and "Friends" I think you could relate.. All the best -Marion-

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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