Murder

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    Murder

    Murder, in the first degree
    Have you lost your mind?
    You must be blind
    He didn't deserve to die,
    So many people asking why.
    Open your eyes
    and look around you
    Those bars there,
    They bind you.
    Never again wil you stand
    On the ground beyond there
    Beatings and Rape
    Thats only the begining
    Of what you face.
    You ended that life
    With several stabs of a knife.
    You knew what you were out to do
    The penalties didn't faze you.
    You should have thought twice,
    Then maybe you wouldn't
    Be facing life.
    If it were up to me,
    I'd sentence you to death
    By way of knife.
    You see my friend
    In the end,
    You get what you deserve.
    Murder,
    In the first degree
    You should have opened your eyes,
    So you could see.

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    Utopia666999 commented on Murder

    05-17-2009

    brilliant, a little chilling but gd

    RyneishaB commented on Murder

    05-14-2009

    This one is really good...dark...and i can picture everything you say!!!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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