MOVING ON

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    MOVING ON

    IT HAS BEEN NINE YEARS AND WE ARE STUCK IN A SPOT,
    DO WE MOVE ON ,DO WE TEAR IT APART?
    I LOVE YOU AND YOUR MY BEST FRIEND,
    I CLOSE MY EYES AND PRAY THAT IT WONT END.
    WHAT DO I DO, HOW DO I MAINTAIN?
    WHERE DO GO WHEN LIFE AINT THE SAME?
    TEARS IN MY EYES THEY BURN LIKE A FLAME.
    WHY DID GOD MAKE THIS MUCH PAIN?
    MY LIFE HAS BEEN TORN A PART,
     I WISH WE COULD GO BACK TO THE START.
    TO A DAY WHERE THERE WAS NO FIGHTS,
    KISSES AND HUGS WITH NO SPITE.
    SMILES ON OUR FACE TO COVER THE SHAME,
    ACTING SO GOOD WE NEED FAME.

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    purplekisses commented on MOVING ON

    06-18-2009

    wow.. all i can say is wow.. u sould like me in this poem.. i love poems that i could realte to.. it really touch my heart and soul and i would read this over and over cause i love this.. please keep writin cause i love ur work..

    inspiredbyluv commented on MOVING ON

    06-02-2009

    WOW WOW WOW!!!!!! THIS POEM SAYS ALOT ABOUT MY RELATIONSHIP WITH THE LOVE OF MY LIFE!!! I OFTEN FIND MYSELF ASKING GOD FOR ANSWERS!!! TRYING TO FIGURE OUT IF THIS LOVE IS THE ONE FOR ME BUT HE KEPT ME HERE FOR ALMOST 2 YEARS SO IT MUST BE??? U HAVE A NATURAL GIFT AND I THANK U SHOULD GIVE THANKS TO THE LORD EVERY SINGLE DAY AND IT'S VERY GOOD THAT U IS CHANGING YOUR LIFE AROUND!!! GOD BLESS U!!

    LIFEWILL

    06/02/2009

    thank you i was married for nine years and she left check out love = pain.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

    LIFEWILL’s Poems (6)

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    MOVING ON 2
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