LOVE=PAIN

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LOVE=PAIN

KEITH SAID IT BEST WITH "DONT CLOSE YOUR EYES".
WORDS TAKEN FROM MY MOUTH NOUGHING LEFT BUT A SIGH.
NOT KNOWN YOU HAD SOMEONE ELSE,
WORDS NEVER TOLD ONLY FELT.
WHY BABY, WHY DID YOU LEAVE?
CRYING SO HARD I CANT BREATH.
WHAT DID I DO TO EARN THIS MUCH PAIN?
HOW DO I OVER COME THE SHAME?
EVERYONE KNEW BUT ME,
LOVE WAS BLIND I COULDNT SEE.
I NEED NO EYES TO FEEL THE PAIN,
YOU LOVE ME? THATS WHAT YOU CLAM?

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dumplin commented on LOVE=PAIN

10-26-2009

couple of misspellings and it was rather short, but I feel your pain.

purplekisses commented on LOVE=PAIN

06-18-2009

omg this is wonderful.. i can relate to this.. great writing..

nmedina commented on LOVE=PAIN

06-18-2009

OUCH!!! Sounds like you were badly injured while on love duty. Good work, short and bitter sweet.

Swann commented on LOVE=PAIN

06-18-2009

The poem is very good and relatable. I think that all of us have been there at some point in our lives. One thing I would check is the spelling. I think it may have some part in the contests. Keep up the good work though.

TheBoy commented on LOVE=PAIN

06-02-2009

Wow , i know how this feels...it was horrible experience indeed, but i am still young and i guess love isnt for me. Keep it up, you have major talent, and i look forward to reading everything you write

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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