Mourn the Weeping Sky

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    Mourn the Weeping Sky



    Percieved decades have seemed to pass since I
    last saw their face. Hindsight of regrets and past
    mistakes, should've have cared but I didn't. Heart
    longing to see them again, lost connection is so far away.

    Unwanted sheltering, they clipped my wings before I
    learned to fly, I mourn the weeping sky. All the beatings,
    all the seething, pent up frustration drove me away. Mis-
    understanding now dawns upon me to this very day.

    To the forests I retreat searching for solace and tranquility.
    Subversion of wickedness denying all responsibility. I want
    to explain... to tell them how I felt but now that is far too late.
    Loss for words, a multitude of emotions crushes down on me.
    Realization of a profound truth they actually never left me.

    Comforted by this new-found introspection. Invisible to me
    I know they still guide and advise. Knowing this, I no longer
    have to mourn the weeping skies.

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    RPT40 commented on Mourn the Weeping Sky

    01-17-2011

    I agree with Artie, this is very good. The further ahead we move in life, the more we have to look back on, and the more we see all around. I also give a 10

    Artie commented on Mourn the Weeping Sky

    01-17-2011

    Wow- This is very good!! I can't believe I'm the first to comment on it since it was posted in '09! 10 from me

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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