Miss Bessie

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    Miss Bessie

    Written and Created by Dolly Fox Erich

    Copyrighted August 15, 2009, All Rights Reserved

    Dedicated to Bessie

     

    I’m thankful for my life

    Amidst all the envy and strife

    I had a strong will to live

    And a lot of wisdom to give

    God created none like me

    He made me special, don’t you agree

    In life you must give the best you’ve got

    Don’t spend time worrying

    About what you’re not

    I raised my child and helped others too

    That’s the way I was taught to do

    Don’t be selfish and keep it all to yourself

    Spread the wisdom and your wealth

    Thank God for making me like I am

    Bessie is my name

    I’m one of God’s lambs

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    jademelissa74 commented on Miss Bessie

    08-20-2009

    Ahhhh, how refreshing to come across a lamb of God's once in a while. This piece is so beautifully arranged. You share the joy within your heart. Thank you for sharing. God bless.
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    Dovier8

    08/23/2009

    Thank you very much for taking the time to read my work. I enjoy writing poetry and songs and childrens books. Wishing you the best in your gift too. Dovier8

    jenifer commented on Miss Bessie

    08-19-2009

    im not christian but all faith sees life the same as gentle and a mericle....................................................
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    Dovier8

    08/26/2009

    Hello Jenifer, Thank you for taking the time to comment on this piece. I appreciate your time and comment and I hope that you are continuing to write inspiring and delivering works yourself. I believe in you that you will succeed and get over the tests and trials and enjoy the wonderful days. Dovier8

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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