M.E.S.S.

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M.E.S.S.

MESS… Misery and Evil Side by Side!
Mess is a way of life that many try to hide.
Mess will consume you, drag you down, and fool you;
Yes into thinking that all is gold
When low and behold,
no greater lie has been told!
Get off the stage and into the crowd,
See what they see, are you still so proud?
Weather it’s “Tell the truth and shame the devil”, or
“Open your mind to higher level”, will you aspire to be better or
Muddle through only to settle…

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poet4dasoul commented on M.E.S.S.

07-28-2009

In a short piece you captured the pain of over 70% of ppl who're fixed in some lot, and having the hardest time strategically maneuvering their way out of their MESS. Thank you for the reality check I really like the play on the word mess; you seen and felt this one.

dancingbear commented on M.E.S.S.

04-22-2009

Kind of hits you upside of your head. Thanks for that.

FiloRozzell commented on M.E.S.S.

04-22-2009

It was beautiful but I'm waiting for part 2..

JaLaw commented on M.E.S.S.

04-21-2009

This poem is like a cup filled with truth, I wish the world could drink it. nice job.

lonewolf commented on M.E.S.S.

04-16-2009

i love this piece. very thought provoking. nicely done

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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