Heartstrings

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    Heartstrings

    I knew you before you came and waited my whole life
    just to see the face of he who would call me his wife.
    The world going by meant nothing in all my days,
    until that day we met I knew I had found my way.
    I care not for everything, just that my everything is you;
    that you live life loving me just as I love you.

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    dahlusion commented on Heartstrings

    12-07-2009

    You have delivered a poetic gem to the pages of OP.

    FiloRozzell commented on Heartstrings

    04-22-2009

    Short, sweet and to the point I loved it it almost felt like you were talking to me, ha,ha..Great ride...

    peacefully commented on Heartstrings

    04-22-2009

    SWEET

    lonewolf commented on Heartstrings

    04-16-2009

    you showed great emotion here in this piece. very nice work.

    orsonav commented on Heartstrings

    03-03-2009

    You write well concerning love. I think that is an excellent genre for you to write in. Great Job!

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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