MESMERIZED

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    MESMERIZED

    cocoa eyes magnificently framed by shades
    full, sexy lips under a perfect nose, upon a flawless face
    gorgeous body chiseled to perfection
    every part evenly porprotioned
    covered by soft, delicate skin
    complexion resembling chocolate porcelain
    words are slick and lethal
    so I let those others drink your poison
    I'm smarter than that
    unlike men
    I don't think with the privates I have attached
    mesmerized by you
    you try to put me in a trance
    while I want to stare, I know it's not best
    so I decide to still a glance
    I engage myself with other things as you walk my way
    my hands are sweaty and throat is dry
    struggling for the words to speak
    as you extend your hand and say your name
    my knees and body become weak
    I shake your hand politely and nod my head
    because I can't pry open my teeth
    and I would walk with you
    only if I could pick up my feet
    it's hard to deny what others saw in you
    but yet they were all lame
    but it seems like I'm falling for you too
    and I have no one else to blame

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    Vincent commented on MESMERIZED

    12-03-2008

    Good poem, expressing the conflict of Phyical attraction and trying to play it cool when someone takes your breath away. Critique: steal a glance, not still a glance. keep up the good work.

    bforibus commented on MESMERIZED

    12-01-2008

    beautiful poem of a strong woman on the edge of losing her power but still battling to keep it. i guess im a sucker for confrontation.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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