ME

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  • Loss

    ME

     I watch your lips moving,
    trying to hear what they speak...
    its just words,
    words without meaning,
    words without feeling.
    I look into your eyes deeply,
    they stare back at me, but they dont see me
    they dont feel me,
    they dont see me begging...
    I hold your hand to my heart,
    you think that you know,
     but you dont

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    ahardwalk commented on ME

    11-28-2010

    This poem is very good!!! How you explain how you feel and how your searching within to find something anything that can make u feel as if the feeling you feel is mutual is excellent!!
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