Cry

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    Cry

     My body went numb
    my legs went limp
    i crashed to the ground
    emotions overtook me
    an all i could do was cry
    but my eyes were all dried up
    i could not shed a single tear,
    not a single tear ran down my cheek,
    not a single tear to wipe
    an all i could do was cry.
    My hands were shaking,
    my heart was trembling,
    i was buckled, i was broken
    an not a single tear ran down my check,
    not a single tear to wipe
    yet all i could do was cry

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    Mayuna commented on Cry

    01-13-2011

    I like how the words just seem to cascade in a gush of emotion. Situations like that are horrific to have to deal with when you are so distraught and can't seem to be able to cry it out physically. I love this. A ten.
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