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  • Lost Love

    Me

    A wall that's of security and love easy to build hard to knock down. A lock on the heart that's rusted, Can you hear what's in your face, whats within, whats rubbing against your skin. It's getting dark times running out there are so much that needs to be said but no time to waste. I feel hopeless, have I failed, did i do what i needed to be done, where did it go wrong. You had the world you had beauty and you had the meaning of it and it's your lost

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    kwailand commented on Me

    01-27-2010

    This poem is deep and full of truth. The prose ran smoothly and the meaning was hidden and then right there.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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