Lust

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  • Erotic

    Lust

    kissing deeply

    pation riseing

    hands caresing

    bodys trembleing

    hand on the breast

    with hands around his neck

    fingers tangled in the hair

    pelvis to pelvis they collide

    heat riseing

    sweat falling

    erotic sounds

    long hard shafts

    shoved into tight dampness

    harder and faster

    untill it explodes

    into a breathless awww

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    LadyLuck commented on Lust

    03-19-2010

    simple but still magma hot. very well good job on this
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    blindmaster commented on Lust

    09-18-2009

    I see trailer park fucking, excuse my language. It is wonderful that you express this episode and it stands out to me. I have read porn magazines, porn videos but what you write is more powerful and has more of an impact! I think you should put more thought into it. Just my opinion but it is tight!
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    hvyrmtl1 commented on Lust

    08-28-2009

    damn. passionate love like that is always good. Good job for the imagination.
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