Love.

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A poem written about current events.

Love.

My time with you is new.

It is nothing I know, nor is it anything I am used to.

I am usually the one who knows everything, but…

This is different.

I have no idea how to function, or how to react;

I am going solely off of instinct.

The most natural instinct is being with you.

I don’t know that I will be able to find the proper instinct every time,

but I will certainly try to trust myself, and those around me to make the right decisions.

For us.

Because if there is one instinct I have, it is that I love you more than anything.

That is the one detail about which my head and my heart are in agreement.

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mdpoetgirl commented on Love.

02-07-2011

this is simply beautiful... very nicely done, Mimix...

Philius commented on Love.

01-09-2011

There is no fantasy here, only truth and meaning. I love this poem, babe. It's a deep, passionate reservoir of love exposed and expressed to the world. The fact that each day of my life I help serve the topic of this poem is a joy to me. Hopefully, I'll be able to provide you with many stories, although I know that even without me, you have millions of worthy and beautiful things to share; I only help the surplus.

MimixRose

01/09/2011

Aww. I love you, babe. I can't wait to make beautiful music together.

BrokenHeart2009 commented on Love.

01-09-2011

I like thhe fantasy of this poem with the methphores of how it feels to be in love and to go off the instiinc to be with the one.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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