Love

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    Love

    So much can be said about it,
    and anybody it can be said to,
    hearin it at the right time,
    can fill you up like someone fed you,
    you might buy a card to confess it,
    flowers to express it,
    because of it people have even died,
    some have been arrested,
    wonderful pictures have been painted ,
    from marriage and commitment,
    but also because of it two people hate each other,
    and towards one another hold resentment,
    it means so much to someone,
    nothing at all to someone else,
    like a book in a library,
    among many other books on one shelf,
    i've been on both sides,
    said it and had it said to me,
    but only meant it with one person,
    and at times express it fully,
    and i 've come to understand,
    feelings also age with passing days,
    if not celebrated like birthdays,
    they are forgotten like unmarked graves,
    don't mistake it with mother and father,
    sister and brother,aunts uncles or cousins,
    realize its different with the opposite sex between one another,
    its really a beautiful thing,
    if u ever find out you mean it,
    to some its like a u.f.o,
    they've heard about it but never seen it,
    but you'll know when you find him or her,
    cause no matter who your with,in the back of your mind,
    its that person you would prefer,

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    oldaubry commented on Love

    09-13-2009

    Very nice descriptions. Addresses the subject very well. Now, just my opinion here, so please don't take too personal, this is meant constructively, I wouldn't offer any opinion if I wasn't impressed! There is an attempt by the writer at rhyming, and I am a big fan of meter (rhythm) and rhyme. It looks to me as if you have the ability to incorporate both into your poems and I think that you could double the impact of your words if you would do so.

    Tino82

    09/14/2009

    Thank you for taking the time to read my poem,as i have been writing for awhile,i haven't studied any text on the craft of writing,so i'm not familiar with (meter)rhythm,i will however take the time to find out what it means,thanks again.

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