LOVE GONE AWAY

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    LOVE GONE AWAY

    I stared love straight in the eyes. I was face to face with it. I didn't want to own up to it at first, but it was there one minute and the next minute it was gone. Taken away.....from me.

    What did I do? What did I say? One wrong word and love went away. I'm sorry I apologize. I don't know what to do. My heart is broken and I'm desperately missing you.

    To hear your voice. To hear your tone. Even if just over the phone. A tear in the seams that I tore. I was really hoping that we became more.....than friends.

    We were getting closer. You were becoming my world, and I thought.....well I thought I was becoming your girl. In as instant, it was gone, I didn't know. I had so much love to give. So much love to show.

    A wonderful person. A kind heart. Hurting your feelings was never a part.....of the program. I apologize. No harsh words, no bad things to say. I stared love straight in the eyes, face to face, and now.....it's gone away.

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    boomboom56 commented on LOVE GONE AWAY

    09-17-2009

    Sad stuff. Your words really say how you were touched by the moment. I hope you continue to write and allow these humble eyes to enjoy your work.

    TigerLily

    12/31/2009

    I do apologize for just responding. It is rare I come to this site,which I plan on getting better about that. I do still write. Writing is my passion. With this poem, I did feel a little sad, because he is a good person, and the last thing I ever want to do is hurt another persons feelings., but it just wasn't meant to be.......and life goes on.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

    TigerLily’s Poems (6)

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    SO FINE 2
    LOVE GONE AWAY 1
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