Love Creates

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Love Creates

Think of your past
all the memories there,
and sift through the darkness of anguish, despair,
when shadows of doubt
fell deep in your mind,
and all appeared lost, no solace to find.
What dialogue followed between day and night?
Did you look on the good side,
give a good fight?
Or throwing your hands in the air with a shrug,
did you say "It's not my fault!"
remaining so smug?
We really create what we feel in our hearts,
if it's love, be assured
that you're doing your part....

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BDIsernhagen commented on Love Creates

06-05-2009

Brilliant! next to Whispers its my favorite of yours so far! it's like taking a tour of myself, and I like that you said "we create what we feel..." because so often I think we blame everyone else for who we are and what we feel. 10, no doubt. 10, because I cannot go to 11...

dcain54

06/05/2009

Thanks so much, glad you liked it!

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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