like a cloud

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    like a cloud

    It's like a cloud has been hovering over my head. Filled with rain that washes away the pain. The pain I feel every time I remember that you are no longer here with me. No longer here with me wrapped in my arms, whispering sweet nothings in my ears. Telling me how much you love me every chance you get. Calling me constantly asking me how I am and how my day went. like a cloud you drifted out from me and away from my life. like a cloud you are just a slight image I see in the sky.

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    Drifter commented on like a cloud

    06-02-2009

    Youre very good with images, it makes it easy to see the metaphor and the clouds, kinda puts you in the same shoes, very nice poem

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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