Letting loose...

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    Letting loose...

    Letting loose...
     
    Flashing lights impair my vision upon my entrance
    to this place I like to came to, to let loose.  As I re-gain
    my focus I get in my groove as one of my songs comes
    on.  I throw up my arms, and swing my hips, I feel
    like a sip of long Island ice tea is coming on strong, I'm
    in a zone and the night is still young.
     
    Easy...I have to remind myself to take it slow, though I
    thought of coming out all week long.  Here I am surrounded
    by folks I wouldn't expect to get loose off of the goose.  Smiles,
    and cracking of bottles is all I see around me.  It's thrilling!
    I love to see people like me who work hard, but go out every
    once and awhile and have a good time, setting aside drama
    to go on a night ride.
     
    It's popping non-stop music.  I'm on my 3rd cup and I think I
    need a seat, my feet are killing me.  That secret I won't
    release cause these shoes look good on me.  You see,  women
    have this thing about their shoes,  if it makes the out fit cute,
    cool.  That's what Epsom's salt are for, we'll party now and
    soak our feet later, for that I am a firm believer.
     
    Time has passed and the laughing isn't inviting anymore. I wish I
    wouldn't of drove myself I think I need some help. To keep it real
    with you I'm really faded and tired.  I think I drank my weight tonight,
    my body's leaning slightly.  I had a super night,  and I don't regret a thing,
    except when I wake up tomorrow and see the room spinning.  Even
    though I feel this way because of my doing,  I would do it all again
    I just can't fight the feeling...
     
     
    By Candice Perry  7/07/09

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    CasimirJash commented on Letting loose...

    08-28-2009

    I feel like letting loose after reading this lol. Great poem, well wrote and you had fun with it. Nice job

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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