IN the center of this world...

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    IN the center of this world...



    In the center of this world

    I am.

    I'm like a pen point

    so small

    I can't be seen.

    I'm passed by,

    I'm overlooked,

    I am, in the back.

    In this world

    my face is lacked.

    But take a closer look

    and you will see,

    I'm a rare piece of Excellency,

    chasing my dreams,

    out here being me

    amongst everyone who doesn't see me.

    I'm un-stoppable

    especially being unseen,

    I have no interruptions in between.

    So thank you world for letting me shine,

    and though I've been a pen point in your eyes

    I've still made a difference in somebody's life...

     

     

    By Candice E. Perry 11/2010

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    Chaos128 commented on IN the center of this world...

    12-01-2010

    I can't think of a better combination than recognizing the obstacles and, at the same time, realizing that you have the ability and determination and to overcome them.
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    orbits4

    12/01/2010

    You said it best "recognizing"...Thank you for your feed back :-)

    Rhymer commented on IN the center of this world...

    11-17-2010

    To make a difference in somebodies life takes away our insignificance. Excellent write.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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