IN the center of this world...

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    IN the center of this world...



    In the center of this world

    I am.

    I'm like a pen point

    so small

    I can't be seen.

    I'm passed by,

    I'm overlooked,

    I am, in the back.

    In this world

    my face is lacked.

    But take a closer look

    and you will see,

    I'm a rare piece of Excellency,

    chasing my dreams,

    out here being me

    amongst everyone who doesn't see me.

    I'm un-stoppable

    especially being unseen,

    I have no interruptions in between.

    So thank you world for letting me shine,

    and though I've been a pen point in your eyes

    I've still made a difference in somebody's life...

     

     

    By Candice E. Perry 11/2010

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    Chaos128 commented on IN the center of this world...

    12-01-2010

    I can't think of a better combination than recognizing the obstacles and, at the same time, realizing that you have the ability and determination and to overcome them.
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    orbits4

    12/01/2010

    You said it best "recognizing"...Thank you for your feed back :-)

    Rhymer commented on IN the center of this world...

    11-17-2010

    To make a difference in somebodies life takes away our insignificance. Excellent write.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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