Leave my mind

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Leave my mind

I know i shouldn't think about it, as much as i know i still do but everything she said to me, all the Shit she put me through. She always promised that our love would always last, now It just lays there lost, frozen in the past. I want this to change i don't want to think about it anymore, i want something new cause i'm sick of my heart being torn. Someone pull this thorn from my side i can no longer take this pain, cause every time i think about it the tears start to fall like rain. I start to wonder if she's thinking of me too, all the things she said and all the Shit she's put me through. I wonder when she lays there with him at night if she even thinks or even cares about all the times she made cry. She shredded my heart she got inside my head, time after time i had wished that i were dead... Someone please take this knife from my back, the pain is so damn bad. I'm hurt, i'm torn, i'm Pissed off, and you expect me not to be mad? I'm furious, you messed with my head and you know it's all true. I can't believe you would do this to me after everything i did for you! I gave everything to you and wanted nothing but your love in return, you faked that part to, you played in the fire and i'm the one who got burned. I'm sick of it all; i don't want to think about you anymore. You've done your damage; you left a permanent scar. So somebody please take this bullet from my heart, so i can finally breathe again and so i can restart. I'm sorry but i need you out of my head, so to you this is my final goodbye... I love you, but now i just need you out of my life.

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ShanneN commented on Leave my mind

04-08-2010

I'll pull the thorn from your side. I'll take the knife from your back. I'll take the bullet from your heart.

MarionYost commented on Leave my mind

02-22-2010

This is a really good poem I think we can all relate with this. Strong emotion, the point is clearly stated. The flow was a little off at times but It's a great write. All the best -Marion-

frazel5 commented on Leave my mind

10-25-2009

I felt your pain, my heart aches for you. I can relate but i cannot begin to know how it felt to be hurt like that. This tears at my emotions. Beautifully done.

nonners commented on Leave my mind

10-19-2009

hella powerful-definately felt every word. great read

FranzJ commented on Leave my mind

10-14-2009

very emotional and gut wrenching I thing many of have been there

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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