Dopey

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    Dopey



    I'm Gonna Miss You Little Brother, It Wasn't Your Time,
    You Had To Deal With Some Shit But In The Wrong State Of Mind,
    And I wish I Had A Moment Just To It Down And Chat,
    And Let You Know That It Wasn't That Bad, It Wasn't That Bad,

    But You Made Your Choice And I Can't Take That Back,
    So What I'm Gonna Do Is Hit The Scene With An Attack,
    It's A Lyrical Prayer, Help Guide You To The Light,
    Help Keep You Safe With The Angel On Your Right


    You Fell Up You Couldn't Seem To Get Down,
    You Stood Still While Your Life Turned Around,
    You Were Blind But Still You Could See,
    Now Your Dead But Alive As Can Be,

    Why'd You Do it, That Horrible End,
    How I wish That I could Talk To You Again,
    We Was Tight Dopey You Know It Was True
    If You Would Have Asked I Would Have Asked I would Have Helped You through.

    Father Please Forgive Him For He Knows Not What He's Done,
    Keep Him Safe With A Warm Place In The Sun,
    You Helped Me So Much With A House And Some Food,
    I Wish I Could Have Returned The Favor To You.

    I"m Gonna Miss Ya, Along With Everyone Else,
    I'll Spread Your Story, So You Can Humble Yourself,
    Look Down Upon Your Peers Your Family And Friends,
    We're Gonna Miss Ya Liitle Buddy I Know We'll See You Again,
    But Until Here's To Absent Friends, Absent Friends.

     

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    jdwyer commented on Dopey

    12-17-2009

    nat This blew me away. I had tears staining my cheeks by the time i reached the end. each line so true so vivid and so sad.

    natertot

    12/17/2009

    thanks, it really means a lot to me

    kage commented on Dopey

    11-02-2009

    Great work ,,damn nice choice of words ,, they fit, they fit

    natertot

    11/02/2009

    thank you kage, it means a lot to me

    PenCatz commented on Dopey

    10-22-2009

    I am about to cry. I am so sorry nater. I wish I would have not said what I said. I lost my aunt and never knew. She died and I was born. No I feel like when my family sees me me they see her. I am so sorry. Pen

    SuperChick76 commented on Dopey

    10-14-2009

    Wow, damn boy, that was a beautiful poem. The flow was nice, a couple missing commas, but no big deal. Beautifully written, and very heartfelt. Great job. Enthralling.

    nonners commented on Dopey

    10-11-2009

    loved this one nater-great lyrical genius--hi from clearfield utah!!! went to layton park 2day! nice meetin ya in chat

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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