Last Kiss

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  • Death
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  • Depart
    • Jayandben
    • Chillin' and writin'...living the life ^.^

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    Last Kiss

     No matter the distance I run
    No matter the places I hide
    You always find it quite fun
    To tear me up inside

    When I think you have my heart
    When I think I know you well
    You throw it oh-so far
    And put my soul through hell

    Every time I pull you close
    Every time I feel your breath
    I just want another dose
    Of that lust-scented death

    I have a crush on Death
    I have a desire to be embraced
    Everybody else has left
    So long, this desire I've chased

    But you have to say goodbye
    But you have to dismiss
    Our love with a hefty sigh
    And one last kiss...

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    Kristie commented on Last Kiss

    06-04-2010

    OMG love it kawa!!!! my fav two lines were "Of that lust-scented death" and "I have a crush on Death" lol yay love yas
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    TwilightLover commented on Last Kiss

    02-10-2010

    This is a great poem. Keep writing more. I am adding your stuff to my favorites.
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    Jayandben

    03/13/2010

    Thank you so much! I appreciate all comments and your support is very enlightening

    BringMeBullets commented on Last Kiss

    02-09-2010

    This is sad, friend. But very good. You have always been very good at writing. I like this one, and it appears to be your newest? I hope that things are going good for you... Much love.
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    Jayandben

    03/13/2010

    I'm glad you like it :) but I just posted a new one called No Longer A Home Of Mine

    girlygirl1234 commented on Last Kiss

    02-07-2010

    oh my judas. i loved this poem. its very beautiful. and very emotional
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    Jayandben

    03/13/2010

    THANKS and I liked the oh my judas

    WinterFrost commented on Last Kiss

    02-05-2010

    Les épreuves de notre jeunesse, donnent nous la sagesse de notre Moyen Âge, et aux mémoires de notre vieillesse.
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    Jayandben

    06/11/2010

    Je suis d'accord definitey, bon garçon.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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