July 3, 2009

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    July 3, 2009

    I.

     

    There’s a large rock

    On the top of the mountain

    To sit upon and see

    People in cars and

    Talking on phones while walking

    it all happens at once.

     

    One person sits atop

    A mountain with a mind full

    Of thoughts of sadness

    While cars roll down streets

    And girlfriends talk to boyfriends.

     

    II.

     

    I am here

    Being me

    Away from the world.

     

    III.

     

    Eyes fixed on

    A silver jeep

    Catches my attention

    And the dark-haired girl

    Steps out.

     

    By the time

    I climb down

    I will have

    Lost her.

     

    IV.

     

    An the ground

    It’s all a crowd

    And I’m a part of it

    But invisible.

     

    I’ll have to hitch

    A ride to wherever

    It is I should be.

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    everafter commented on July 3, 2009

    07-04-2009

    its very easy to adapt and understand your poetry. It is real and moves the heart with such wonderful verses.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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