Judgments

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    Judgments


    What would people say if I took this knife and silently slipped away,
    Without a second thought or goodbye.
    What would people say if I never woke up one day,
    Without leaving a note or giving a reason.
    What would people say if I were swinging from a tree,
    Without joy but in silence.
    What would people say if I slowly faded away,
    Without hope of ever coming back.
    What would people say if I took my life slowly leaving the proof all over my body,
    Without a care about what people say.
    What would people say if I said what is there left to live for if everything is too good to be true.

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    XxshatteredxX commented on Judgments

    05-21-2009

    i love this poem holly!! its very dark and emotional but it is so intense. my favorite line is the last one, "what would people say if i said what is there left to live for if everything is too good to be true."

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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