Is this me?

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  • Confusion

    Is this me?
    Is this me?
    Is this who i am?
    Is this the girl you wake up and see?
    This ain't me, full of hatred and lies!
    This ain't me, the one who everyone despise!
    This ain't me, look into my eyes do you see me or someone i am trying to be?
    Please help me!
    Because....
    This ain't me!

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    Ls0o commented on Is this me?

    10-16-2009

    You have the passion for expressing yourself but your lost in a cycle of doubt... Find yourself... here is my crest to your trough... http://www.originalpoetry.com/i-am_68 By the way you're far too pretty to feel this way...
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    akayakar commented on Is this me?

    05-02-2009

    Sometimes it takes a liftime to be the person you want to be. Don't rush it. Fine wine gets better as it ages!
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    lonewolf commented on Is this me?

    04-29-2009

    i ask my self that very question many times. well done
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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