Drown

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    Drown

    If life was a lake then im drowning.
    I can reach your hand, but it keeps slipping.
    When i touch your hand you start gripping.
    When i feel your touch i'm below the surface.
    I wonder who pushed me, and was it on purpose?
    As i sink deeper into the water, i see no light its getting darker.
    Your face fades and so does the night.
    I cant believe it. This cant be right.
    As the water gets cold i stop splashing.
    As you drift away i stop thrashing.
    As i drown in my sorrow, my feelings, my pride.
    I realize because of love i found a reason to hide.
    It was the boat in which i fell off the side.
    I didnt try to get out until it was too late, see what happens when you wait.
    You sink deep,and you never succeed.
    You realize that love is the only thing you need.

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    monkyntz commented on Drown

    10-16-2009

    good one i love the life being a lake you have a talent of drawing a person into your poem excellent

    nonners commented on Drown

    10-09-2009

    added this one to my faves -this could be a song! great imagery, i felt like i was drowning-awesome read. really

    theladyz commented on Drown

    05-17-2009

    Your words make me feel you and see pictures. Your soul seems to be speaking out. Z

    darklancer19 commented on Drown

    04-14-2009

    not bad at all

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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