Hollow

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    Hollow
    Your dying and i cant watch.
    Your time is ticking and you don't have much.
    I love you, but i try so much to hate you.
    I hope your ready for the painful truth....
    I hate being around you knowing your drowning in your sorrow,and worrying if you'll make it till tomorrow.
    I hope you think of this with every sip you swallow.
    Because this is your daughter, and without my daddy i am hollow.

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    nonners commented on Hollow

    10-09-2009

    spell check! im bad myself-im going through this now i feel every line
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    Bethane1978 commented on Hollow

    04-28-2009

    Excelent
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    Faithful1 commented on Hollow

    04-28-2009

    I really liked this poem... it brought me to tears. I'm a daddy's girl too. I also have people in my life I feel this way about.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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