Is My Life Worth Living

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    Is My Life Worth Living

    Is my life worth living
    and can you tell me how
    put yourself in my position
    and you will say wow
    i was born of pure evil
    and my life's a living hell
    I've been through so much pain
    wondering if theres a heaven or a hell
    my life's in a bind
    that just want rewind
    I've asked the Lord to take me
    but i guess it's not my time
    i wonder am i evil
    or am i just losing my mind
    I've asked the Lord to take me
    but he just gives me a sign,
    "saying, you are my child
    I give my world to you
    knowing your life's worth living
    that's why i want take it from you

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    Jedi4Jesus commented on Is My Life Worth Living

    06-25-2009

    I appreciate your vulnerability here. Your expression is very clear that at one point your life wasn't worth living but at the end you realized it was not yours to take because your body is a temple...."You are not your own; you were bought at a price." There for honor God with your body."
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    Sx9 commented on Is My Life Worth Living

    06-11-2009

    how deep,god is love and its a simple life,if you are outside then we all have vibes like this one time or the other, but its a different thing on the inside,there life is m minimal and the less the better for god is salvation and that is free, that is all we need,,so walk good,,
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    Plot121 commented on Is My Life Worth Living

    02-10-2009

    Kind of perplexing poem two sides to the same coin leaves one confused about the whol. Good read. Robert...
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    cottonluv commented on Is My Life Worth Living

    02-10-2009

    thats was a nice poem.its short but it do speak to you.good work
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    bforibus commented on Is My Life Worth Living

    02-10-2009

    very deep and emotional. dark even. loved the despair in this poem.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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